‘Sorry You Can’t Spell’

July 24th, 2011

On the heels of a fairly frustrating day with technology recently, an email popped up from sorryyoucantspell@aol.com. This address was no good when I tried to reply, but the point of the message: One of my stories had two typos in the lede. That story was actually several stories, layer upon layer of rolling post-storm coverage. At one point, because I was rushing, I updated the text using an autocorrecting smartphone.

That right there was a mistake, because smartphones are dumb tools with great potential. Regardless, I fell short by not proofing better, by not taking time to see the edit through its conclusion. It’s not the first time I’ve edited an typo into a story and will probably not be the last — not that I’m the least content with that fact.

Errors rankle but don’t define me. No writer reviews his or her work without the urges to tweak something, no matter how small.

I embrace the critics, especially those who are so intensely bothered by my error, it becomes a mission to let me know. Most just email; a few call and point out the stupid thing I’ve done. They are usually a little surprised at being thanked for their kindness. Rarely do they hide behind an anonymous email address. A well-delivered criticism is a credit to both parties. It means the critic cares enough to speak up. I respect the time and consideration given my work.

When ‘local’ is meaningless

July 18th, 2011

Journalists overuse the word “local.”

It started when radio and television broadcasts dropped the habit of touting the nearest major city in favor of something, anything, to suggest they were reporting nearly from your backyard. News teases and headlines using a specific town’s name signaled otherwise to a reader. Hence “local” became the substitute. That’s when it actually meant nearly (and sometimes actually) in your backyard.

Today, “local” is pervasive in an almost perverse way. Some journalists sprinkle it throughout their copy like salt on a juicy steak. As the written word enjoys a resurgence, thanks to our Web-obsessed culture, local could easily be replaced with the name of the appropriate state, town, subdivision or street. Such specifics brighten the copy and connect the reader without artifice.

Excellent editorials

July 17th, 2011

Below are two excellent editorials, both on the same subject: The failing of an elected official, Cape Girardeau County Prosecutor Morley Swingle, to acknowledge an ethical breach despite overwhelming proof. Kudos to the Southeast Missourian for both op-ed pieces:
Swingle owes his constituents an apology
Conduct unbecoming
You may wonder why a Michigan resident and native of the Mitten State would even care about this story. The short answer: I used to live in that county and cover county government. More on that in a bit.

‘Passed Away’

July 11th, 2011

My week started at memorial services for my late uncle, my godfather. It ended with news of Betty Ford‘s death; in between, a murder spree in Grand Rapids, near where I used to work.

These days, many reporters can’t use the one word that applies in each of those stories: They all died.

Tragically. Quickly. Accidentally. After a long, painful illness. At the end of a long and fruitful life. But in the end, died. The favored euphemism these days seems to be “passed away.”

Years ago, I used that phrase in a story and my editor said, “When he passed away, where did he go? And how do you know that?”

Those questions steer my reporting on deaths. “Died” tells the truth. Leave all other phrases and euphemisms to family, clergy and funeral directors.

Bad Journalists

July 9th, 2011

I have been quite disgusted with the details of the phone-hacking scandal allegedly perpetrated by the British tabloid, News of the World. Every day this week, the stories have been worse. While listening to one radio interview with a former NOTW editor, I learned that (in his mind, anyway), journalists somehow had a right to hack into the voicemail of a kidnap victim. He said journalists “help” police that way.
That’s not how my journalism teachers put it. The level of invasiveness is sickening and the notion that, in the pursuit of a hot story, ethics would be so discarded as to allow what appears to be interference with a murder case.
There’s no excusing such behavior by anyone who assumes the title of journalist. Ever. But others are saying it far better than I. This scandal, far from being a thing happening overseas, puts a taint on U.S. properties owned by Rupert Murdoch’s empire, including Fox News, the Wall Street Journal and the New York Post.
As journalists we must work, now ever harder, to preserve and adhere to high ethical standards.

About

June 26th, 2011

I’m a journalist in Michigan, currently employed as Canton editor for Patch.com. I’ve covered local and regional government in Michigan and Missouri; health; elder care; natural disasters; small business; entertainment; and a whole bunch of other stuff. I started my career when newsrooms had typewriters and some pressrooms used actual hot lead to set type. Today, I carry my office around in a backpack and have filed stories from my car, restaurants, coffee shops, lobbies, and random outdoor locations. Check out my resume and links at www.pegmcnichol.com/resume

Stable Versus Unstable

June 25th, 2011

Stable is easily one of the most irritating words when misused in a news story. Others, notably Baltimore Sun’s John E. McIntyre, have said it better, but this just bears repeating for new or uninitiated journalists:

Stable is not a medical condition. As the person who inculcated this lesson for me said (and often, I might add), “Stable merely means a person’s medical condition is unchanged. You can be stable and dead.”

In a breaking-news situation, it can be tough to get an accurate medical condition from first responders and medical workers. Besides responders’ inclination to protect for privacy reasons, the patient really needs to be evaluated to determine which of the four conditions (good, fair, serious or critical) applies.

A reporter can ask, when told the patient is “stable,” whether the condition appears to be life-threatening or not.

Answering the medical-condition question is an essential element to covering crime, medical and accident stories.

Va-cay-shun

October 7th, 2010

Yeah, vacation. I’ve not taken a real vacation in a long time. Been off work, after a newspaper shutdown (Dec. 2009 to Feb. 2010 and after returning to Michigan in spring, 2009. But those were open-ended, job-hunting-without-a-paycheck kind of vacations. For this next career move, I blocked out some staycation time. Tonight will be all about cooking: squash soup; a pasta-sweet-pepper combo; a potato dish; and perhaps some of my Aunt Jean’s macaroni-cheese recipe, with spinach added because, well, I just really like spinach.

Moments, in reverse, from one shift

June 18th, 2010

Sleepy; rain; a single bolt of lighting – distant and perfect; a rainbow fragment; scene of a suicide; first trip over an old bridge; a coworker’s mirth; looking for one right word and then some; M&Ms; a crime scene; police scanner noise drowning out cohesive thought; bread; news at 11; the last sip of coffee; sizing up the room; cleansing breath.

Dixie Carter

April 13th, 2010

Sad as I was to learn actor Dixie Carter died, the ‘How?’ remained unanswered for a bit.

Her husband and fellow actor Hal Holbrook left the cause undisclosed in the written statement asking the public to respect his family’s private grief.

Then, quickly, others confirmed the details, adding the words “endometrial cancer” to Carter’s obituary — I hope people take time to learn about this disease, which is diagnosed more than 42,000 times a year and takes the lives of more than 7,000 a year.